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Q2 Enrollment Update — May 15
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This report shows effort but misses the evidence layer Winnie expects. The core OKR linkage is present, but the data doesn't yet tell a clear story about what's working and why.
AI Feedback5
You report the current conversion rate (8%) but don't show the trajectory. Winnie will immediately ask: is this improving or declining?
Suggested Fix
Add a simple table: Apr 8.2% → May 8.0%. Even a small decline needs to be acknowledged proactively.